[TheDraigc] Succubus Kouhai

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  Haigen 8th February 2026 , 11:09 am

  Disclaimer: My time stamps might be a little off here. I adjusted them for the new headphones-part, and while they fit the version on my computer, they don’t match up here.

  The idea here was simple in comparison to the previous two: Shamsiel teaches a new generation of Succubi, here Mika and Mari, on how to get their own food after pretty much all succubi abandoned the traditional way in favor of doing the real thing.

  :11-13 The added red glow from the moon works really well.

  :14 Fuck up on my part here: Originally Shamsiel opened her mouth here before it switched to Mika growing fangs. Which was a nice lead in to Shamsiel influencing or inducing the transformation, but it was removed because I pointed out that the red glow disappeared from her mouth when she did.

  :23-32 Love it, it’s fun and in character for Shamsiel not only to start with paizuri but also make the girls grow the necessary assets for it.

  :33 The glowing eye is a nice way of showing that they are under Shamsiel’s influence here.

  :34-43 Great progression with Shamsiel showing how it’s done and both of them struggling at first but getting the hang of it fairly quickly.

  :48-52 Being impressed by the girls fast progress as the lead in for the next step is a nice addition and the transition from Shamsiel to Mari is seamless.

  :59-1:01 A fun edit and implies nicely that Mika wasn’t inactive in the meantime.

  1:02-14 A fun interlude with all three of them enjoying the appetizer and Mari going a little to far following Shamsiel’s example here. Also gives me the implication that Shamsiel originally wanted to call it a here, but both Mika and Mari are so eager to continue so might as well.

  1:14-23 Like with the previous times Shamsiel lead by example the progression from her to the girls works really well. And one more thing, this goes for all voice samples by the way, love how they are re-contextualized here.

  1:24-38 Them overconfidently enjoying the ride is a nice set up for what’s to come.

  1:39-41 And the tables turn due to their hubris.

  1:43-45 I like the transition from the dominant riding to them taking a more submissive position here. Also 1:23 was good foreshadowing showing Mika and by extension Mari being at their limit after taking them in and here losing control being followed by the guys pushing further in than they should. Also adds a sinister undertone to Shamsiel’s face here, like she anticipates it happening.

  2:09-:11 Still climaxing in the submissive position, reminds me of lesson.

  2:12-:16 With what I mentioned earlier, I love that you can read it as Shamsiel letting them get overwhelmed on purpose to either teach them humility or how in Lesson that it doesn’t necessarily matter as long as they enjoy it. Also love how Mika goes back in with a more seductive face while Mari just has a shit eating grin on hers, that’s a nice juxtaposition.

  2:16-:25 Love how they throw themselves back on to them and how seemingly both sides enjoy enjoy the ride. Special mention to 2:24 when Mika is just enjoying having her tail grabbed now instead of being overwhelmed by it.

  2:27-31 The lactation and the cat transformation are also a nice touch, showing both of their their own unique “strengths” and really getting into their own.

  2:31-32 Love how both the leg lock and Mari inviting her partner show them being comfortable with the guys taking the lead.

  2:49 And Mika joins in with the cat imitations, a trio of Catcubi. Also Mari being on top for the shot before makes it look she was mounting her.

  2:51-54 Really cute. The romantic undertones are nice in general. This is another look behind the scenes here: in my original pitch this one would have been presided by a different one focusing on two succubi going from seeing humans as food to developing romantic feelings for them. But I decided against it thinking it would have been to similar to the original succubus lesson. This tone would’ve carried over to this one as one of the main things Shamsiel would want to pass on, but without that I think it works even better here, either as something new generation develops or it just happening all the time and being accepted.

  2:57-3:00 The emphasize on the deep penetration works really well here and during the time they got overwhelmed. Mika was clearly enjoying it at first and here again, highlights the differences between her and Mari who is riding her partner instead.

  3:02 And Shamsiel gives them her blessing, they are good on their own.

  3:04-14 Them going for a second round afterwards was Draig’s idea and I really liked it, shows how eager they are for more. Let’s hope their partners can keep up.

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    TheDraigc 9th February 2026 , 2:11 pm

    Well, nothing to point hahaha

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